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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 3 Comments
Date Added: October 06, 2011 16:10:40 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
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Breathless' Breath


Breathlessí  Breath

 

You wore a new jacket today, and I hadnít seen it

You showed new moves today, and I hadnít seen it

You took the breathlessí breath away, and I really mean it



Author's Notes:
This is true.  It really happened today! Those, who've read my "On That Special Day" poem, will know. Yes, it is about her again.
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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumcolin on March 20, 2013 06:23:26 PM Report
very creative
Comment By: FreeSteve on November 22, 2011 05:14:04 PM Report

I certainly enjoyed this and I really mean it.


Comment By: FreeLewis on November 7, 2011 06:22:15 PM Report


I like this, write on


Lewis





 


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