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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 13 Comments
Date Added: August 03, 2013 08:08:43 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
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I Want A Place


I   want   a   place

 

I want a place, with a decent liveable space

Which opens to a field, with kind smiling face

Where birds and butterflies frolic, pursue and chase

And flowers compete with stunners, with unparalleled grace

 

I want a place, simple, not resembling an endless maze

Which opens to a warm placid lake, gentle to bathe

Where the mountains in horizon, not dressed in haze

And all the hurts and yearnings, disperse in phase

 

I want a place with a respectable liveable space

Which opens to a room with inviting and receiving face

Where both you and me, can enter with a respecting pace

And all the doors and walls withstand an enduring chase

 

I want a place, simple, yet has a lineament all its own

Which remains warm and tranquil, from twilight till dawn

Where the nocturnal flowers bloom, alluring smiles of their own

And so my friend, you’re invited, it belongs to you, feel at home 



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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 22, 2013 04:42:38 AM Report
How warm and inviting, Dean............



Such a unique and creative piece!  Wonderful door you've imagines between walls and heart! :o)



Pamela


Comment By: FreeRohit Sapra on September 6, 2013 09:20:17 AM Report
I love this poem. It is truly amazing and I must say it is flawless in every manner. PERFECT.
Comment By: FreeTimespell on August 16, 2013 11:31:07 PM Report

lalala. yeah... Nice speaking to you

Hope to speak to you next week...

So say all of us..

 

 

:O)

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on August 5, 2013 08:30:54 AM Report

Well dean there is such a place

away from this old rat race.

An amazing grace.

I am never disapointed when reading your poetry in this place.

 

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on August 3, 2013 05:07:45 PM Report

Thank you for the invitation, it sounds such a spiritual kind of place to relax, to feel at ease and let all the hurt and sadness disperse.... 

Beautiful, Dean. 

 

MITZEE

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on August 3, 2013 10:23:37 AM Report
Excellent rhyming scheme Dean, I hope you find such a place.    Henry
Comment By: PremiumBrian Dziokonski on August 3, 2013 09:46:42 AM Report
A wonderful place Dean! I liked the rhyme scheme to, pretty cool. Brian
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on November 15, 2011 03:16:32 PM Report
Seems to me, sir, that C-P might have something -- if a little -- in common with the place you want...  Certainly there are nocturnal flowers here...  Certainly -- at least some of it -- remains warm and tranquil...  and certainly we're invited... and we feel at home here...  



Warm thoughts.  Kind words.  Fine poet. 




--David

Comment By: Freesaeed davoudi on October 31, 2011 05:24:08 AM Report


im looking for simplicity every where , and you wrote about it :


 


I want a place, simple


 


its nice my friend , maybe i feel that simplicity is every thing for me ....


good luck my friend


 


saeed

Comment By: Freesaeed davoudi on October 31, 2011 05:21:34 AM Report


im looking for simplicity every where , and you wrote about it :


 


I want a place, simple


 


its nice my friend , maybe i feel that simplicity is every thing for me ....


good luck my friend


 


saeed

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 13, 2011 01:14:23 PM Report
And don't we all??   Sounds beautiful
Gene

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on October 12, 2011 06:41:38 PM Report


Ahhhhhh... what a perfect poem that reaches out to whom its for I do hope

she reads this and understands it all about sharing..loveing ..trusting and making a life together....

 Wishing you all the happiness to you both...

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 12, 2011 12:27:30 PM Report
Dean, Everyone deserves such a place to share and I know you'll be were you want to be patience is all you need.  I believe I just said this but when you least expect it you'll find your standing right where you want to be.  A beautiful poem.  Tina




 


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