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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 5 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2011 11:10:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
And When You’re Here With Me

And  When  You’re  Here  With  Me

(Inspired by "When you're not here with me")
(by: Jim Kistner Jr)


Branches feel the summer

And leaves hold their place

Riverbed thanks the rain

That brought refreshing breeze

 

Flames, dance away the night as candles melt

Inviting the light to chase the darkness away

And children will feel at ease, and will always play

As presence of dancing flames will really be felt

 

Birds will learn how to fly and not fall

They’ll find freedom as they free their soul

My heart will learn how to cope with this ball

As it bounces, yet hasn’t found its goal




Author's Notes:
I would like to dedicate this to Jim Kistner Jr for his beautiful love poem, which touched me deeply and I thought I should write the other side of this great love poem. Hope you will enjoy.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 25, 2011 04:18:51 PM Report
Dean, this is beautiful, see you have so much to say.  Tina
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 24, 2011 12:59:35 PM Report
Nature is a winner any day in my book   Very nice read
Gene

Comment By: FreeJim Kistner Jr on October 24, 2011 12:30:15 AM Report
What an honor..and a great way to do it! I like this a lot..Thank You!
Comment By: PremiumShirls on October 23, 2011 06:42:20 PM Report


You letting that bird fly free again. Too much freedom and she may forget to come back also you think playing with your balls you gonna win the goal? Lol


But in seriousness, you did very well Dean.


Jim is a very nice person and I am proud to call him my friend. I am sure he is feeling honored  by his poem being an inspiration for this.


 


Shirls/ ME

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on October 23, 2011 06:23:04 PM Report


This is just wonderfdul to read what a kind thing to do..

Yes he is a great writer from the heart...He will enjoy reading this that is for sure!!

 Always ~ She Whispers





 


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