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Our Worlds, Our Lives, Same Difference - 2 -


       Our Worlds, Our Lives, Same Difference (2)

 

       (A response and an appreciation to "The Difference” by:  Angelface, Poet_By_Heart)

 

       In your word
       You might be torn apart,
       Bearing the brunt of hardship.
       In my world
       It only adds to my misery!
       For the works of art


       In your world
       The search might never end
       And the love is rare.
       In my world
       The challenge is still on


       In your world
       Universe is conquered
       Yet, one star is missing.
       In my world
       I see many stars
       Each twinkle, to capture my heart!


       In your world
       Oceans crossed, left behind
       "For true love to find”,
       In my world
       Too cold to swim, should shatter the ice, in my mind
 


       In your world
       Friends may play hide and seek
       Just to pose a challenge, and some fun!
       In my world
       I am blessed, you’re right
       Still, like to chase the fun;


       In your world
       Teasing for attention, is what you are,
       In my world
       I go deep, explore and see
       The secret of nature,
       And what they truly are?


       In your world
       Beauty is in abundance, everywhere
       Yet, only one stands out.
       In my world
       True beauty, is in a normal girl
       A "pretty woman”, lives in despair!


       In your world
       Half of believing, is in hearing
       That leaves the only other half to see, you see!
       In my world
       Seeing is believing, yet I listen
       With sharp ears and focused eyes, to thee


       In your world
       Blandishing, not allowed
       True, and only fair,
       In my world
       Just don’t say it,
       If all you can see, is only air!


       In your world
       There maybe a doubt, for cause,
       In my world
       Each and every effect, is the cause, for a pause!


                 And a bit further In my world,

      

       "I believe in true love” too,
       Though, I would say is relative!
       And "I haven’t found one either”,
       The truer, the harder I should look!
        No need to build any barriers for me, you see!
       Or hide behind man-made walls,
       As true love, will shatter them all
       And penetrate.

        

 


Author's Notes:
I would like to thank every body, who responded to my first part of this series with some great twists by Tina and Shelia. Angelface especially followed the style and challenged the topic even further, giving me the chance to write this one staying committed to the original style, yet with another twist! i.e. change of the world's priority from "my world", to "your world" to begin.


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on November 7, 2011 04:41:35 PM Report


Thanks for the appreciation..Dean !!!  This was a pleasure to write and keep up with you! More to come!! Im speechless! Flattered, and WOW !!!


 


@ TINA, I dont think he wants me like that.. I honestly hope Not any way!!! I dont even know him !!!!

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 7, 2011 02:04:18 PM Report
Dean, A great reply!  There shouldn't be a need to transition from your world to hers just creating a new world together in which a part of you both can belong.  Tina




 


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