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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 3 Comments
Date Added: November 18, 2011 21:11:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Was It You Or ?


Was  It  You  Or?

 

I saw a girl, who looked like you

And I wondered, if it was you!

Oh, I donít know what am I gonna do?

 

 

A  Poetís  Fantasy

 

And I know, you will never come

Yet, I am waiting for you

Even though, not with me that you belong.

 



Author's Notes:
These initially were written to be posted as separate Haikus, but somehow I felt it's right to post them together. In fact, the second one was written 3 days ago and the 1st one I wrote this evening based on the real fact. I really saw this girl in the shop I went to top up my mobile phone credit! So here it is ...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on January 29, 2012 10:09:30 PM Report

Certainly original, a soft and easy read.


Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 20, 2011 11:58:17 PM Report
Dean, A beautiful poem, yes sometimes we take a second look at stranger and our heart skips a beat for just a moment.  "A Poets Fantasy" very sad but we just can't help when and who our heart leaps for. Tina






Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on November 18, 2011 09:26:56 PM Report


I have been in a crowd of peopel and someone look like the man I loved!!!

I was just beyond words....Who ever its for it awesome!!





 


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