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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 5 Comments
Date Added: November 19, 2011 22:11:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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When You Cry…


When  You  Cry…

 

When you cry,

My world turns upside down,

And I want to frown

 

When you cry,

My heart aches

And I become a crossed face

 

When you cry,

My head burns

And I cannot think even an ounce

 

And I want to see you smile

Always, all the time

No matter how you feel,

Hard, but is possible

 

Just remind yourself

Of one sweet good little memory:)

 

Author's Notes:
Cry of a friend, is hard to bear:-(
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on March 20, 2013 04:16:45 PM Report
i am smiling reading through this.....nice write x
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 22, 2011 08:30:11 PM Report
Dean, When a friend cries it makes us feel helpless, we want desperately to fix everything but we can't.  The best thing to do in that situation is just be a great listener.  Which I know you are.  A nice write.  Tina
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on November 20, 2011 11:36:36 AM Report
A very caring poem.  I hope your friend knows how much the crying upsets you...  If not, 'twould be better told.  Everyone needs to feel cared about.  Perhaps to send your friend this poem...   Nice verses --David
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on November 20, 2011 04:29:36 AM Report
Wonderful!!!! Tears they say are a way of letting out feelings that need to be set free. Sadness though can stay with us a long time. This made me tear up, then slowly a smile came forth from its beauty.. Great job!



Moonie xx


Comment By: Freesaeed davoudi on November 20, 2011 03:08:04 AM Report


Dear Dean :


emotional parts


i select this verse :


When you cry,



My world turns upside down,


 


i love it


 


good luck my friend


saeed





 


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