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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: December 17, 2011 07:12:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Never Heard. Still Missing.


Never Heard. Still Missing.

 

   First it was lull; then _

   Came the storm, full-force; and _

   Everything were fallen; then _

   It was lull again; and_

   I had fallen; then_

   Rose once more; and _

   Wanted more; then _

   I remembered; and _

   It was a Number; then _

   Had been given; and _

   Never got the chance to call; then _

   Came second storm; and _

   I was denied; then _

   Fell again; and _

   This time I was pushed; then _

   Heard the voice; and _

   I was down! Then _

   On was the party; and _

   Never invited; then _

   Didn't know that never wanted; and _

   Frankly, didn't give a damn; then _

   Rose again; and _

   Learned new lesson; then _

   Found the child in Me; and _

   Wished for a game; then _

   Was no game to play; and _

   Toys all torn! Then _

   Not even a numbers game; and _

   Had lost the Number; then _

   It was lull again!

   And _

   Glad didn't call;

   Then _

   Not heard the voice;

   And _

   Would memorise the Number;

   Then _

   Hard not to tempt a call.

   And _

   I should confess!

   Though never heard the voice!

   Yet _

   Miss it,

   Like Iíve lost a Nightingale!

   And _

   Every morning;

   See a different bird!

   Yet _

   None have voice!

   Donít sing;

   But _

   Would they?

   If I called?

   And _

   What if?

   Forgotten their voice!

   Then_

   Will never hear; and _

   Will always miss; then _

   Will be lull again! And _

   As it should be; then _

   Maybe?! And _  Then _


Author's Notes:

Life is a cause and effect, some causes leave deep effects, and some not so deep! Even the deep ones eventually will fade away! Yet, will leave their mark.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 16, 2013 04:56:10 PM Report

Dean, this gripped me right from the start. This is really powerful; moving. I feel the hurt within you, at the time you must of felt.

Hugs xxx



MITZEE

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on December 19, 2011 10:14:02 AM Report


Very deep  Dean about lifes up and downs and so very true.


I wait to hear an another voice for I am so long over due

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on December 17, 2011 06:07:10 PM Report
This is one hell of a poem.  I can't pretend to understand its frantic narrative.  It is the tone that I understand -- and it is the fierce tempo that caught me -- off-guard.  Dean!  Whence this excursion into curséd night!  It is a revelation.  A change. It is a strange poem.  A strong poem.  A scary poem from another district.  It races.  And. Yet.  Perched within, a single nightingale...  A fascinating fast-paced fantasy, this...  A tale of terror? flight? escape? fight?  ...Is this not Life?  --David 
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on December 17, 2011 05:22:58 PM Report


Oh... Yes.... The ups and downs in life.. people who cross our paths some will mark us for life!!

So well I understand all the emotions you have expressed!!

 Texas sends her Hugs to cheer you up!!

 Always ~ She Whispers





 


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