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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 5 Comments
Date Added: December 21, 2011 12:12:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Heart Broken And Soul Torn


      Heart Broken And Soul Torn 

 

     I feel I have been torn apart
     By the very person, I loved
 

     I feel I have been broken beyond heal
     By the very person, I loved

     I feel I have been shattered beyond mend
     By the very person, I loved

     My heart aches really badly
     I feel itís going to explode!

 

     I want to cry
     But all held in my heart
     Captive,
     Seems a deliberate action
     To finish me off!
     And how would she feel?
     When sees I am all gone
     Finally,


     She will breath deeply
     May even cry and sigh
     But deep down, will be happy
     I have come to believe this
     After so many years
     Sheís shown her hate and disgust
     Every day, many times a day
     Sheís shown her detest,
     How happy she would be?
     The very moment that I am gone


     And I want to shout
     To the world
     To myself
     To my children
     But not to her
     I have nothing to do with her
     I have done every thing I could
     To make her a successful person
     And all I got in return
     Daily insults!
     To me and my very family
     And wanting me disappear
     But what about my two beautiful children?
     How would they feel?
     What would they think?
     Could a woman, a mother, a human
     Be this cruel?!
     Using children to break their father
     To humiliate him,
     Over a temporary shortage of few coins and notes


     I feel heaviness in my heart
     My longs are moving so slowly
     And pushing my heart down
     Heaviness is real
     I feel almost a ton on my chest
     Now I shed some tears
     Donít know what to say!
     Donít know what to do!
     I want to go out,
     And walk aimlessly
     To an unknown direction
     To leave forever;


     Where would she be!
     If I wasnít there for her
     For all these painful years
     Even my mother doesnít know
     In fact, no one does!
     But my children;
     Theyíre  bound to feel it
     However, may not show !


     I ask again!
     Where would she be?
     If I wasnít there for her
     For all these painful years
     I didn't know I only was a tool,
     And what a fool!
     To be used and discarded
     Still usable, not even close to end of its lifespan, but
     She is the type that doesn't appreciate any tool she uses!


     If it wasnít for my humanistic belief
     Driven from the left brain
     The side that had my eyes on its very existence
     Dictating fairness and justice, seeing details
     Things that together makes and becomes a whole
     Yet, my own wholeness broken apart
     Mistake, naivety, scarifies?!
     Donít know which,
     Made this, a reality!


     The biggest
     The hardest
     The one always unforeseen
     Lesson of my life;


     Maybe,

     I was blind!

 

Author's Notes:
Wrote this quite awhile ago after listening to a friend's heartbreaking life-story, and finally decided to post it, as it suited the recent moods.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on December 28, 2011 11:10:02 AM Report


I am glad you posted it a wonderful poem...we all have our moods don't we??

 Thank you for all your very kind comments on my poems they make me smile....

 "Happy New Year"

Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on December 23, 2011 02:41:20 AM Report
what a sad poem, beautifully done


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on December 22, 2011 06:02:15 PM Report


Christmas kinda brings the best poems out of us,


Dean your delivery of words is one of the best

Comment By: FreeAngelface on December 21, 2011 02:25:09 PM Report
Very heart broken!!! Sometimes its best to write what we feel. We write at our best in heart aches.. Well I know I do any way!! You did a awesome job :)
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on December 21, 2011 01:02:23 PM Report
Very beautifully done!!




 


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