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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: January 01, 2012 00:01:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Dedications Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
You, Are Coming To End.

 

     You, Are Coming To End.

 

     

     What are you and what do you want? And -

     How do you run?

     Roads_ bridges_ passes_ all -

     Intertwined!

     Full of people_ working and sweating

     Yet_ become losers!

     --     --     --

     Are you blind?!

 

     I am one - and have only one life

     Easy for you to take and run! But--

     We_ are more than one

     Countless lives__ and impossible

     For you to dun!

     Though; you never stop trying!

 

     We_ are the mass -- the people

     We_ are the fact -- the eagle who --

     Watches you from above

     You_ continue sucking -- our blood.

     Your thirst will never end!

     Your ruthless rules will never bend, but only --

     For your own benefit!

 

     We_ have the message sent.

     You_ are coming to end.


 

Author's Notes:

A dedication to people, who suffer the most, especially during the recession, resulting from the blood suckersí never-ending greed.

PS. I know not exactly the right time for this, very 1st day of the new year; but too many people weren't able to celebrate the 2012 because of ...

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on January 2, 2012 02:17:00 PM Report
Len, yes they take and take.  I am not blaming the victim as I am one, but is it we who vote, isn't it we who separate ourselves(of course with help be them)  We must join together and show compassion for and to each other.  Love our neighbor. We all end up fighting over the small resources we have and need to survive.   A great write and messaged sent.  Miss Chris
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 1, 2012 09:50:22 PM Report
They have done a great job of protecting themselves with their laws that bend the rules for themselves while they govern the rest of us.  Wouldn't it be nice to have such power you could exempt yourself from the regular people's laws?
Great verses

Gene

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 1, 2012 01:41:37 PM Report
Dear Dean, So be it!  Let THEM come to an end.  We will win!  It's the only way to think.  Will take some doing, but that is the way of war.  And this is war.  What a parody of life!  Whence such greed?  But if the world were filled with people like you, you'd need not have written this striking and hard-hitting poem!  --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 1, 2012 12:46:13 AM Report
..."your thirst will never end..." spot on -- you nailed it with great language and form -- excellent -- Alistair




 


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