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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: January 08, 2012 05:01:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Live A Life Of Soothing Rain

Live A Life Of Soothing Rain


 


When I told you to write me your name -
did I ask you, be my only pain?

 

When I told you to write me your pain -
Did I ask you, put me in the flame?

 

When I told you to pass me the flame -
Did I ask you, feel the self-shame?

 

Your name is now, my pain

Your pain is now, MY pain

Inflamed …
Erupted …
Nothing to gain.

 

Your flame's now, your own shame!
You’re got to be insane!
I see no chain -- of
Roses,
Not even daisies!
To tame you -- in my name!

 

I will stop not, writing -
Just because you’re not sane!

 

I WILL STOP though, your thoughts
Just because, don’t like disdain


You’ve become a crane - and
Picking the brain!

 

Be happy;
Live a life of soothing rain --

Don’t be –
A drain…


 

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In memory of a good friend to be...
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on January 8, 2012 07:47:36 AM Report


This is very beautiful I know she will enjoy this very much...

 You have such a kind caring heart!!

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 8, 2012 06:30:34 AM Report
Complex and beautifully abstract construct of - - I believe self-analysis in a way.  Enjoyed the contradictory nature of it -- great piece



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 8, 2012 06:06:22 AM Report
I am not quite sure what this is about -- but I have strong suspicions...  Seems to me that you're better off now...   Sometimes I totally miss the mark when it comes to understanding poems.  Hope I was at least somewhat insightful here.  A fine expression of something difficult-to-express.  Sincerely, David
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 8, 2012 06:02:51 AM Report
I am not quite sure what this is about -- but I have strong suspicions...  Seems to me that you're better off now...   Sometimes I totally miss the mark when it comes to understanding poems.  Hope I was at least somewhat insightful here.  A fine expression of something difficult-to-express.  Sincerely, David




 


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