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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 5 Comments
Date Added: January 08, 2012 18:01:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dishes And Wishes


Dishes  And  Wishes

 

 

Have you ever done a thing, which
Wouldn’t have done it, you wished!

 

Have you ever said a thing, which
Wouldn’t have said it, you wished!

 

Have you ever met someone, whom
Wouldn’t have met her/him, you wished!

 

Have you ever kissed someone, whom
Wouldn’t look at her/his lips, you wished!

 

Have you ever slept with someone, whom
Wouldn’t touch her/his skin, you wished!

 

Having done
Having said
Having met
Having kissed -- and
slept,
Which one, can you guess? – and boy
Do I regret?

 

The answer is
A simple NO

 

Moments of time -- and
All were mine,
And hers
Ours

 

Why be silly and regret?
When can simply forget!
Ever met
All set
Wrapped in velvet
Got wet!
And performed octet.

 

Do you think --
I paid my debt -- and
What about your debt!
Can we now duet?

 

Author's Notes:
Wrote this a month ago, but developed recently, I mean today:-)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKory on January 17, 2012 04:04:12 PM Report
Really enjoyed this piece.  Liked the way everything flowed and how the poem was constructed all throughout.  Great write!

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on January 9, 2012 10:50:21 PM Report
So glad you posted this...It speaks out!!
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 9, 2012 04:44:36 AM Report
This is  M A R V E L O U S !  It seems to make for a kind of comforting;  all of us do things we later wish we hadn't done:  but all of those things had purposes -- reasons...  but me, I'm like Dirk, I forgot all those things regretful things...  nah, I'm David -- I remember each and every darn one of 'em -- and then some:(  Great poem, Dean.  Goes beyond!  -- Dave
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 9, 2012 02:51:39 AM Report
i agree with Alistair, interesting writing , great job,,,and have i , i'm too old can't remember


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 8, 2012 10:03:48 PM Report
I love this for its language and complexity which make it a thing of great beauty -- it is almost three separate poems yet also one.  My congratulations on bedazzling and befuddling me so!!  Loved this



Alistair





 


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