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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: January 10, 2012 17:01:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I Want To Kiss You


I Want To Kiss You


(Inspired by,  ‘Well, I Am Doing It Now’  by: Dirk Kruger)


 

I want to kiss you -- and
Let you dream about the land -- that
Would have made the kiss possible

 

I want to kiss you -- and
Let you dream about an island -- that
Would have been embraced by --
The ocean of my heart -- to
Join yours by invitation of --
That kiss, never happened! but -- it
Was possible.

 

I want to hold you -- and
Let you dream about-- the
Gentle touch of frost -- on
That land, never saw light! but -- it
Did exist.

 

The kiss --
Would have let the sun -- shine on land,
Frost would have melted -- before
Was even formed -- and
Us --
Would have performed -- that
Magic show,
By swirl of a wand -, from the passion
-- full.


 

Author's Notes:

A continuation to my previous post ‘A journey --- With A-No-Taker’, while I was in that mood, I read Dirk’s brilliant romance & the inspiration was instantaneous. 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLewis on January 11, 2012 08:22:21 AM Report


Wow very good read,


Firehark

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 11, 2012 03:57:37 AM Report
Well that's one heck of a poem, sir!  Hats off to Dirk and you!  Great writing -- especially the cadence: wow!  --David
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 11, 2012 02:10:03 AM Report
wow my boy, that's very good, we will make this a romantic week, well done have enjoyed it a lot


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 10, 2012 06:05:55 PM Report


Well your two  hearts and writings  definitely have found the right place.


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