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Author Name: Freepoematic 3 Comments
Date Added: January 12, 2012 06:01:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
Good Bye My Wind --- Im Not Crying

Good Bye My Wind --- Im Not Crying



I had said it ; had not I --
We may have come to say -- goodbye


And it seems -- we have now -


I tried, did I not --
To hear your why-s and what-s


And it seems -- silence -- has now engulfed


Muted, once before --
Forgiven, and I forgot -- so
We had our moments -- tho
Very short lived, quickly passed


And it seems -- never -- should I have asked


I thought, we had it mended --
Then -- you broke it and ended
So sudden that - we - melted --
Remained that alone, only - I -


So -- My Wind, -- was I meant to catch you when falling ?
I wasnt a -- wind-catcher -- nor will I be one -- but ;
Did the best could - I - to catch the falling wind -


And it seems -- that -- you werent the one !


-- And


Only -- remain -- one thing ;
That -- to come -- and say goodbye
Tho believed ; yet , much harder -- for me
To spell out that very last word


And it proved -- to be -- easier for you


Here the ones usually dont use
Adios ,-  au revoir ,- auf  wiedersehen, -- from my heart
Gle gle ,- chin-chin and farewell, -- for the sake of this art


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Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on January 12, 2012 06:40:57 PM Report
A beautiful way to say goodbye which is brilliantly written and exquisitely presented.  Good job Dean,


Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 12, 2012 12:00:45 PM Report

I think I....NO, you tell me.



Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 12, 2012 06:50:48 AM Report
huh , who are you saying goodbye 2 - brilliant poem


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