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Author Name: PremiumAuld Yin 5 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2012 05:01:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Dedications Add To Favorites Listen To Poem | Text Only
 
Dad

 

Hi dad I’m now near the age went you went away,

one more year for me to that hurtful day.

Hurtful only that we no longer could talk,

about things we talked on your last eventful walk.

 

I’ m now seventy five years old Dad,

and for your seventy six years I’m so very glad.

I remember whin ah wis a wee three year auld boy,

an’ you made that wee aeroplane toy.

 

Out of a few scraps of wood,

you could do almost anything, you could.

Remember Dad that galleon you made?

two foot high it was but sailing it never made the grade.

 

Remember dad near the end of the last world war?

you did things that Dad’s are made for.

That American, in 1945 visiting your employ,

gave you a lolly you saved for your wee boys.

 

An’ ah gave the lolly to ma big brother Jack,

for I really wanted the colourful wrap.

An’ that furst Malteser you brought back,

hof fur me an’ hof fur Jack :)

 

You were a genius Dad we ah kent that,

an’ a ken Dad yea can niver come back.

Nae matter Dad ‘cos yea a’ways in ma hert,

oh! An’ remember yea made that wee hond cart?

 

Nuthin’ Dad wis impossible fur you,

aw’ yer memories have jist accrued an’ accrued.

Like the sideboard yea made oot auld tea chests,

an’ the handles ? Oot o’ bungs fur barrels were the best.

 

Ivery night Dad up went oor livin’ room window,

at 7’o’clock you shouted ‘Alec’. Aye, that wis so.

Yea wir niver happy until we were safe in bed,

but niver Dad til’ we were washed an’ fed.

 

You worked Dad, six til’ six, aw’ days o’ the week,

aw’ dad, yea niver missed a day, even in winters bleak.

Aye an’ oan Friday nights yea had yer ‘doings’, (Reward)

That wan screw tap boatel o’ beer named McEwens.

 

Aye fur McEwens is the best buy, the best buy in beer.

so the advert said Dad, nae blidy fear.

Sma’ things Dad in ma Memory stick,

like sometimes yea luved tae tak the mick.

 

It’s Christmas time now Dad here in OZ.

why do I think of you Dad? It’s just because!!

Now that I’m 75 I can see your inner mind,

ah’ ah kin see that Dad, yea were a’ways kind.

 

Wan day Dad we’ll meet again an’ talk,

aye Dad an’ go on anither memory walk.

Til’ then Dad be patient an’ niver fear,

we’ll meet afresh an’ start in blidy furst gear :)

 

The Auld Yin.

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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on October 16, 2012 07:44:45 AM Report
you are very fortunate to have such memories to keep your heart warm.......... truly fortunate....well expressed
Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on February 2, 2012 08:39:03 AM Report
Alex: this is heartfelt and so precious.  Beautiful memories of you and your Dad and your brother Jack.
My Dad has been in Heaven since 1996 and I miss him and have lovely memories also.  

I know our Dads and other family/friends smile down at us and follow our Earthly journey.  




Lady D

Comment By: FreeFrederick Kesner on January 26, 2012 03:04:34 AM Report
It may be too late for others but I may yet aspire to be the dad that you have.

Many thanks for sharing.


Comment By: FreeAeon Onopka on January 24, 2012 01:35:36 PM Report
What a very beautiful dedication indeed. I did much enjoy. In a way I also have lost my father for we are not that close. I do hope that changes though.


Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on January 24, 2012 07:59:54 AM Report


My what a very beautiful dedication... Our parenst are very special indeed....

 Brilliant heart felt poetry...I miss my parents.... so much

 ALways ~ She Whispers





 


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