THE NEXT TIME YOU TELL ME TO GO I WILL GO by Firestone Feinberg

		Author Name: FirestoneFeinberg	6 Comments
		Date Added: January 26, 2012 10:01:29	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THE NEXT TIME YOU TELL ME TO GO I WILL GO

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1/25/12

THE NEXT TIME YOU TELL ME TO GO I WILL GO

The next time you tell me to go I will go —

And never return anymore —

I’ll saddle my horse and I'll ride far away —

On earthly romance close the door.

I’ll ride to the forest, the mountain, the field —

I’ll travel the meadow so green —

I'll ride to the sky and I’ll ride to the cloud —

To Your Kingdom no mortal has seen.

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	Comment By: She Whispers on April 9, 2013 07:49:51 AM	Report
	Oh ... How did I miss this? Brilliant every verse... You have this way of reaching your readers a gifted writer indeed... When its time its just time... LOve ~ India Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Alistair Muir on January 26, 2012 10:12:34 PM	Report
	What a beautiful description of passing -- I like the rhyme as well -- so subtle. You're NOT going anywhere soon however -- that's an order!-- Great write Alistair Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Dean on January 26, 2012 06:23:51 PM	Report
	And this is how a poet becomes immortal ... ~Dean Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Henry M. on January 26, 2012 03:47:14 PM	Report
	Again, I see this as someone being called home and the willingness for them to go onto heavenly plains. Great writing David. Henry Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on January 26, 2012 11:36:37 AM	Report
	Come on over to my Castle Dragonwyck and we'll drink coffee, watch all my mythological menagerie and enjoy the lovely "fantasy world". Lady D Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Aeon Onopka on January 26, 2012 10:52:03 AM	Report
	What a beautiful and interesting write—filled with so much fantasy! One cannot help but to simply feel the imagery and appreciate your words. Aeon Respond To This Comment