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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 5 Comments
Date Added: January 28, 2012 21:01:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Am Sat Thinking


     I Am Sat Thinking

 

    
      I am sat -- thinking
     About a place near it --
     which I was once -- far
     And away -- now it seems.

 

 

     I am sat -- thinking
     Of a place far far distant --
     Which I longed for -- once
     Dear -- it seemed then.

 

 

     I am sat -- thinking
     How did I occupy -- the 
     Places I was once -- part 
     Of the everything.

 

 

     I am sat thinking -- of
     A road to peace , prosperity -- for
     All ; and not only -- few
     Having all.


 

Author's Notes:

A reflection on the current hardship, almost for everybody  and how it all began…

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on February 1, 2012 04:54:32 PM Report


Our founding fathers did allot of thinking for us.


Now i wonder who in government can we trust.


So i like you too take an inward view


It seems to be always left up to you.


nice and reflective


of your life

Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on January 29, 2012 01:20:42 PM Report


I have mine when I think of my kids....thanx, Dino!


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 29, 2012 08:02:49 AM Report
An especial quiet moment of thinking -- silent and questioning -- and lost.  A soundless soliloquy that -- even in its sadness -- comforts... [maybe the repetition on the great first line does that?] -- A hardness strangely tender: a paradox.  Great writing, Dean.  Cosmic.  --David
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on January 29, 2012 12:00:03 AM Report
I think we all have that place of peacefullness!!!
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 28, 2012 09:14:23 PM Report
A poignant and elegant write Dean -- beautifully crafted and presented -- thank you



Alistair





 


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