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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 8 Comments
Date Added: February 04, 2012 09:02:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Anatomy Of Kiss

Anatomy Of  Kiss


 

You look in the eye

Briefly,

Not more than four sec, - then

A smooth glance down at lips - of

She, or  mayhap  he -

Hands move to seize the heads -

Very gently you do that

Hearts race

Faces advance

Lips shift

Adjusting themselves

To a precise angle

Positions paragon

Like four pieces of a perfect puzzle

Yearning to match,

Marry each other -- and

Stay together

Paving the way

For bodies

To melt

For each other

In each otherís -

Forever


Author's Notes:

Practice this for your Valentine kiss.  Happy valentine

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 31, 2012 10:24:27 PM Report
The title caught my attention. You made the simple act more inviting and passionate.........with just a few words. Nicely done!
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on March 21, 2012 05:23:39 PM Report


Ohhhhhh......How did I miss this? Just beautiful TO READ .....my friend I really enjoy your style as well....

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeRegina Woiler on February 20, 2012 04:33:01 AM Report
I like the unapologetic passion this exhumes even if it mishaps to be a he....



Very pointed


Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on February 4, 2012 02:51:45 PM Report
Absolutely the perfect poem for valentine's day Dean, practice makes perfect!    Henry
Comment By: FreeSteve on February 4, 2012 11:57:15 AM Report
An interesting approach to it, I like the structure.  Your words move with emotion and capture the reader's attention
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on February 4, 2012 11:53:08 AM Report
what a job , Dean, well done, best valentine poem so far


Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on February 4, 2012 11:14:33 AM Report
Did someone turn up the thermostat in here? 
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on February 4, 2012 09:49:29 AM Report
Brilliantly written and beautifully presented -- nice job Dean



Alistair





 


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