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Author Name: Freepoematic 7 Comments
Date Added: February 27, 2012 18:02:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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     Can't see, have I both my eyes, open?

     Can’t think, yet, my brain is in full swing!

     Can’t talk, and my tongue seems, playing!

     Emmmm ...

     Can I kiss?

     So I will



     And, speak.


     Imagine there was no kiss!

     And …

     "Nothing” would have happened


     How depressing the world would be?

     If …

     There was "Nothing” ?!

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Comment By: FreeAeon Onopka on February 28, 2012 02:25:03 PM Report
I have to agree with Tina. When there is an absence in my life I always find a new door—perhaps leading me forward, venturing into an unfamiliar state. I always find something in the "nothing". This was written just wonderfully. Simply beautiful.

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 28, 2012 09:42:53 AM Report
A world without kisses?   No.  I don't think I'd want to live there either.  No  ... kisses?    Horrible thought.  
Gene      neat poem

Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on February 28, 2012 01:26:43 AM Report
As always Dean a magnificently written piece -- a romantic be you (?).  I thoroughly enjoyed this-- thank you


Comment By: PremiumHOPE on February 27, 2012 09:04:50 PM Report


There is something in the abscence of nothing. Balance!!!  In the abscence of the kiss there is longing for a kiss!   My your heart find that somebody to fill the void.



Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on February 27, 2012 08:09:38 PM Report
You have nothing but love in your dear heart!
Comment By: PremiumShirls on February 27, 2012 07:06:18 PM Report

Very nice write Deans.The world would be a very sad place if people had nothing.



Comment By: FreeTomahawk on February 27, 2012 07:01:23 PM Report

Right on, Dino, you said no mouth full. lol. Get it? lol.




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