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Author Name: Premiumaliopterix 4 Comments
Date Added: March 01, 2012 23:03:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Last Kiss And Embrace




Last Kiss And Embrace



Hallowed be Thy name O Lord above

And revered for Thy kindness.

I wouldst ask a favour for my love

And one I hope Thou wouldst bless.


Let me share a last kiss and embrace;

She who holds my heart and soul.

I wouldst look and remember that face

The memory to keep me whole.





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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAeon Onopka on March 2, 2012 03:33:06 PM Report
I am speechless. You have written an incredibly tender and romantic piece.



Aeon


Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on March 2, 2012 09:55:36 AM Report
Absolutely stunning.  So much said in so few lines!  I guess when poems are very emotional I hide from them by looking at the form and the technique -- as I did here.  But even tho' I (unconsciously) try, I can't help but feel the pathos of this prayer...  --David
Comment By: TrialMedousa on March 2, 2012 09:27:27 AM Report
Aliopterex,
That is the reason for living each day with the one you love as it is your last.  A sad poem.

M

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 2, 2012 05:13:53 AM Report
I don't ever want a last kiss.  I'd rather the person stay.  Alas though.  You're asking the correct person with your request.  Only He knows whether you should get your kiss or not
Nice 

Gene.





 


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