Last Kiss And Embrace by Alistair Muir

		Author Name: aliopterix	4 Comments
		Date Added: March 01, 2012 23:03:54	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming

Category: Love

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Last Kiss And Embrace

Hallowed be Thy name O Lord above

And revered for Thy kindness.

I wouldst ask a favour for my love

And one I hope Thou wouldst bless.

Let me share a last kiss and embrace;

She who holds my heart and soul.

I wouldst look and remember that face

The memory to keep me whole.

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Comments:

	Comment By: Aeon Onopka on March 2, 2012 03:33:06 PM	Report
	I am speechless. You have written an incredibly tender and romantic piece. Aeon Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on March 2, 2012 09:55:36 AM	Report
	Absolutely stunning. So much said in so few lines! I guess when poems are very emotional I hide from them by looking at the form and the technique -- as I did here. But even tho' I (unconsciously) try, I can't help but feel the pathos of this prayer... --David Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Medousa on March 2, 2012 09:27:27 AM	Report
	Aliopterex, That is the reason for living each day with the one you love as it is your last. A sad poem. M Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: e. Gene Myers on March 2, 2012 05:13:53 AM	Report
	I don't ever want a last kiss. I'd rather the person stay. Alas though. You're asking the correct person with your request. Only He knows whether you should get your kiss or not Nice Gene. Respond To This Comment