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Author Name: Premiumpoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: March 07, 2012 08:03:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Is Death Forbidden?

Is Death Forbidden?


 

     Death is forbidden

     Do not want to die

     Until youíre alive

 

     Will ever be

     A real death

     That I doubt

 

     End is a change

     For you and I

     Who will fly

 

     And leave behind

     Those will not buy

     Yet, will cry

 

     No help no cure

     Too late for that

     For lives under hat

 

     Societies ripped

     Broken humanity

     In need of solidarity

 

     Happy to die

     When is my time

     War will not rhyme

 

     With human soul

     Yet warmongers

     Will create hungers

 

     Dying children

     Falling fathers

     Arenít actors

 

     Playing real games

     Their consoles, their guns

     Live or die, and no runs

 

     Dying is easy

     No longer forbidden

     For crying children

 

 


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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on April 11, 2013 07:42:58 PM Report

Stunned! Best poem i have read for a while. You think the saying, "we only live once" would be a good enough reason to enjoy our time on Earth. Instead we stare at disbelief on the news. Constant battlefields, blood, grieve....this will never stop!!! 

 

MITZEE XX

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on March 8, 2012 02:01:12 AM Report
This is just a magnum opus of the serious order.  Your observations are clear but the language and structure - - form and rhyme are sublime.  This is just magnificent



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on March 7, 2012 04:42:52 PM Report


Dino, this was awesome, you got it down, cold....so to speak. lol. One o' your best, compadre!


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on March 7, 2012 01:43:30 PM Report
Very very powerful poem.  Takes the breath away.  I don't think we've seen you in such a serious mood: good for you -- you show another honesty.  Truth is brutal -- sometimes -- hard to see -- you face it bravely -- a fighter: you.  --David




 


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