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Author Name: Premiumaliopterix 3 Comments
Date Added: April 17, 2012 08:04:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Frenzied Love


Frenzied Love



By the time we reached the house we were out of breath –

I remember laughing as we raced one another;

You got their first but I grabbed you -- tumbled over –

You collapsed too and we lay there as though in death.

Granted second wind we fought then to get our key –

But manage it we did falling indoors at pace;

Clothes flew everywhere in an energetic race –

Inhibitions disappeared as we became free.

We kissed – frantically – as though it was our last –

Desperate almost - - every touch excited;

We made love in a frenzy until exhausted –

That spirit of madness took us but slowly passed.

Out of breath once more we held hands and kissed again –

So much in love – hearts beating in time like a train.



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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on April 18, 2012 07:50:33 AM Report
OKAY, buddy:  WHO wrote this:  SHE? or you..?...  Seriously now -- this is one heck of a poem.  Got me in a frenzy.  What can I say?  --David
Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on April 17, 2012 02:25:37 PM Report


Hey! Sounds like the lovin' I ain't gettin', these days! lmao. More power to ya, brother man! :-)


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAminath Neena on April 17, 2012 01:41:38 PM Report
Quite a sensual journey...left me breathless...Wow! 




 


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