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Author Name: PremiumTomahawk 6 Comments
Date Added: May 04, 2012 08:05:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Not Meant To Be
And so here we're standing, you and I
I guess it just wasn't meant to be
Although the feelings that I had for you
Were the very same that you had for me
 
Love don't always run smooth, it seems
Or always come at the right time
Such was the case here, darlin' girl
So much for hopes and silly dreams
 
We didn't count on this happening, m'lady
That we would bond so deep, so fast
We had a lot more in common, was all
But somehow, it wasn't enough to last
 
Who knows why these things happen
That two people should ever come to be
Only to have joy and laughter die in sorrow
Abruptly, like it never existed for you and me
 
If I was responsible in any way at all
For you to have made such a rash decision
Then this is what will haunt me, e'er long
Such will be my personal act of contrition
 
And so, m'lady, I guess this is really goodbye
As unbelievable, as it truly turns out to be
For too briefly, we were of one hand, one heart
Never, I 'll forget you, my spirit shan't ever be free
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
For you, m'lady....wherever you are.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 6, 2012 10:41:48 AM Report
A heart-rending share of your soul's burden.  I can offer no words of advice.  Would it be insensitive to say: There are other fish in the sea...? --David
Comment By: FreeTaniya on May 5, 2012 10:59:56 AM Report
WOW. Although it's a really sad theme the fickleness of the whole situation is so romantic.
Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 4, 2012 08:37:34 PM Report
Do not say never though Len -- you never know... Your writing is just sublime - - heart-felt and so emotive -- a wonderful read -- thank you --



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 4, 2012 03:48:24 PM Report


AS I read this it breaks my heart ..especially after the e.mail she sent me!!!

 Some things are only for a brief time they play with your heart and then they vanish ...

 I exactly how you feel its happen to me more than once...

She found the soft side of your heart the most vunerable,,,

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 4, 2012 12:57:13 PM Report
I must agree with Lady D, very heart-felt! Sometimes not right now, doesn't mean never.



Anna 

Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on May 4, 2012 09:22:54 AM Report
Very heart-felt --- 
Wishes for you to find love and a strong long-lasting relationship.




Lady D





 


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