Poetic ~*~ Crime by She Whispers

		Author Name: She Whispers	4 Comments
		Date Added: May 04, 2012 16:05:31	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming

Category: Broken Hearts

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Poetic ~*~ Crime

Cobwebs stagger through her sleepless mind
he gave her just enough of himself
to make her want it all

He held her emotions just tight enough
to make her tremble so her loving heart
would always whisper call

Now time has past would anyone
in his right mind leave her
so very far behind

Even her trusting heart was just
not smart enough to know
his poetic playful crime

~*~

Time tells her she was still breathing
but her suffering heart tells
her that she is not

With that hurt in her dark wounded eyes
she still knows he loved her his way
with that knowing love plot

Author's Notes:

A poem I wrote some years back when I was more trusting..
WE.... all have to learn from our own mistakes...
And life teaches us hopefully wisdom and not so much bitterness

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Comments:

	Comment By: Karl Berry on May 6, 2012 11:31:54 AM	Report
	OK, Lets get to the bone! This is simply a lust that is sailing with out a mast... simply a pain, that is such a vast thing at hand.... wild words, that hit home and the heart.... you are in a world of floating words... That is simply lust, that makes a thought come alive, in vivid love .....Patch.....! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on May 6, 2012 10:37:22 AM	Report
	So glad you shared this 'old' poem with us. It is exquisite as are all your words. I'm not sure I see the 'trusting' side of this -- but i'm always 'slow' to understand... Love ya, David Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Alistair Muir on May 4, 2012 08:46:43 PM	Report
	Essential words of warning -- I particularly love this write -- it emotes deeply -- marvellous -- Alistair Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Tomahawk on May 4, 2012 04:34:33 PM	Report
	True that, India, trouble is, most of us learn the hard way....I KNOW! Len Respond To This Comment