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Author Name: PremiumFirestoneFeinberg 5 Comments
Date Added: May 08, 2012 10:05:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THE DAY OF REST COMES ONCE A WEEK
b’’h
4/28/12


THE DAY OF REST COMES ONCE A WEEK


The day of rest comes once a week
We try our best to keep it free
From stressful obligation — work —
For so our God would have it be.

Relinquish we our grasp upon
Those things we think control our lives —
Thus being far from cares — common —
How gracefully our spirits rise!




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Comment By: FreeTaniya on May 9, 2012 03:00:55 AM Report
Beautiful. I am not religious and I don't keep Sundays for that use. But it's always great to see faith and hope and peace. I sense this in your poem :)
Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 9, 2012 02:12:02 AM Report
I love Sundays -- seemingly at peace the world seems at balance - - at peace and I write -- as usual much in a small package O pen-master -- a lovely write --



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 8, 2012 06:41:55 PM Report


A day of rest... The lord rested on Sunday ..... But my job keeps me from that ..

My rest only on Wednesday right now....Next month Tuesday and Wednesday

 Love ~ India

Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on May 8, 2012 11:01:17 AM Report


On the sabbath, ye shall rest. I agree with Anna Isabella, that's the way it was meant to be and should be. Good one, Pyro!


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 8, 2012 10:40:06 AM Report
I LOVE Sunday's! This is the way it was meant to be, wonderful piece.



Anna





 


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