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Author Name: Premiumaliopterix 3 Comments
Date Added: May 10, 2012 02:05:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She Walked In The Forbidden Place


She Walked In The Forbidden Place



She walked in the forbidden place –

He - - by her side – none too calm;

Worried he they would come to harm –

Purpose she had set on face;

The beauty of the garden shone –

Walked they in splendid nakedness;

Man with Nature – special oneness ---

Then temptation saw them undone;

Ate they forbidden fruit for shame –

And banished from the garden hence;

Had they now shame and guilty sense --

And each the other could they blame;

And so our flight from innocence –

Gave rise to greed and decadence.



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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 11, 2012 07:49:49 PM Report

G R E A T !

Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on May 10, 2012 12:31:19 PM Report


Yes indeed, a good depiction, Al. I go along with Lady D, Lilith next.


 


Len

Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on May 10, 2012 09:00:04 AM Report
Well you got me on that one.  Took me a few to "catch on".  Now you need to write about Lilith.....



Lady D





 


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