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Author Name: PremiumTomahawk 8 Comments
Date Added: March 06, 2013 18:03:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Short Story
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Moon Lily....Part I
The serious moonlight played down upon the beach that lovely evening
The light shimmering on the water in a most unusual way this time
He walked the sands, gazing out at the horizon, which was fading
Twilight was here and light was leaving, giving way to the moon mistress
 
He noted a lone sailboat on the vanishing horizon, it's running lights seen
And then, he heard, what he thought he heard....a woman singing....faintly
He thought he knew this song....it was her song! Could it possibly be?!
No, she was gone, she passed years ago, she was the love of his life....always
 
Yet, he kept hearing this, over the crashing of the waves, it seemed to get louder
The more he heard it, the more intoxicating it was, it was her song, for pity's sake!
And then, a slight sent of perfume....hers....Moon Lily. This was crazy
He blinked, then felt a bit dizzy and suddenly, the singing and fragrance was gone
 
Just like her....
 
He wandered a bit more, trying to make some sense of this, up the beach, now
He got into his car and started back home to his apartment in South Beach
The Miami skyline appeared, lit like a beacon, it bright lights led the way
As he got in his apartment, he poured himself a strong one and then, to bed
He would dream of this night....and of her
 
To be continued....
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
Something different, I haven't written a short, I mean a REAL one for a while. I hope it plays. (shrug)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 9, 2013 12:48:29 PM Report
A great opening, Len...This reminds me of a black and white ghost flicker from the 4o's......Maybe my mindset makes it seem so, but I can hear Joseph Cotton doing the narration...On to part two....len
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 7, 2013 11:41:35 PM Report

Love the way this starts out. You have mystery, romance, imagery.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

Linda

Comment By: PremiumDean on March 7, 2013 05:37:01 AM Report
A different kind of love Len... always exists.... liked it very much, ~Dean
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 12, 2012 10:39:58 AM Report
This is fantastic, Len.  I really dig it.  Can't wait to read the next one!  --David
Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 11, 2012 02:14:15 AM Report
I like Len -- very much -- So full of romance -- can't wait for more --



Al

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 10, 2012 10:54:15 AM Report


You will have them ladies in stress waiting.....Very beautiful indeed....

 Your quite the charmer..... Looks like a new admirer....

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 10, 2012 09:05:53 AM Report
Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. Lovely!



Anna

Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on May 10, 2012 09:05:17 AM Report
A lovely write....yes, please write more.  Always enjoy whatever genre you add a write to. 



Lady D





 


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