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Author Name: Freependeriki 2 Comments
Date Added: May 13, 2012 17:05:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Rapture
I watch you in a window
caught in the smear of starlight
spun from a cloudless sky
I am transfixed and lost
by your gleaming naked shadow
that quivers in the wind
Oh the glitter and glamour cast
by a moment's glimpse
beyond your veil of secrets
revealed as you turn
to face the Moon

Oh what treasures may wait
before the light of morning
I reach for your silent heart
brimming with a wild passion
but will you feel my need
this deep obsessive fire
this unholy wild rapture
born of new discovered rage
ah...will my final hope spiral
and falling fade away
with the coming dawn

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Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 15, 2012 10:24:20 PM Report


You watched her from inside a window.....Transfixed and lost by her naked shadow..

.with wild passion will she fulfill your need..with wild rapture.....

 Whew..... My heart is pounding with desire!!!

 When you write like this ...Mmmmmmmm.....

Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 14, 2012 03:13:40 AM Report
I just absolutely adored this the first time I read it and it just gets better each time -- Great write sir!



Alistair





 


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