Numb by Saeed Alavi

		Author Name: s_deeas	3 Comments
		Date Added: May 19, 2012 10:05:20	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse

Category: Depression

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Numb

No light's left in my eyes

to see the numbness of my fingers

there is no pain, there is no sense

and how much I miss the agony

dissapointed, I grope

on my bookshelves

on my notes

on my desk

may I find a razor

then I can tear me

to know if there is any pain left

to know if there is any blood left

the razor is selfless

never let me down

flesh or vessel, I dont know

I cut and felt

the last drops of pain

and the warmth of blood

made my numbness gone

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Comments:

	Comment By: Kymberly Donn on May 21, 2012 05:56:52 PM	Report
	There is a line from an old Goo Goo Dolls song "Iris" that this piece reminds me of greatly. The line is "Yeah you bleed just to know you're alive." I like that song and I like this piece. Welcome to C-P Saeed, I hope you enjoy it here. Anna Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on May 21, 2012 05:31:59 PM	Report
	Welcome to our site!! We love new poets and writers.... More please.... Always ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on May 19, 2012 11:10:56 AM	Report
	Hello, Saeed. Welcome to Creative. I look forward to more writes from you. Have a GREAT weekend. Lady D Respond To This Comment