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Author Name: PremiumTomahawk 4 Comments
Date Added: May 19, 2012 12:05:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dare I To Say It
How do I go on any longer with this silly one act play?
My resolve keeps my emotions in check, quiet and still
Afraid, I am, to tell you, there's just nothing more to say
What my head won't attempt here, my heart certainly will
 
When I see you, and hear you speak , my spirits soar
I feel so alive, so invincible and wonderfully blessed
But I cannot tell you that it is you, darling, that I adore
What you mean to me can't ever easily be expressed
 
You don't realize how it is, that you make my heart sing
With that special magic, that you and only you possess
I'd be willing to give up all possessions....everything
If only you could feel as I do, and even though I regress
 
But I must keep it hid, disguise true nature of myself
For fear that I might just lose you forever, oh, my dear
And so, these feelings must ever kept upon the shelf
Though this unrequited love brings me pain, severe
 
Is it fair that someone should suffer in this way?
When there is such passion that's burning in their heart
Such tragic notions go on everywhere, most every day
No ever accused someone in love of being very smart
 
It is that sweet blindness and total ignorance of sense
That makes the world the lovely, intriguing place it be
To have the one you love, with such feelings so intense
Mightier than any mountain, so much deeper than any sea
 
That is what a fool's heart feels, my darling, yes, it's true
If fate smiles upon me someday and if e'er I get my wish
Then this longing and sweet pain was all worth it, for you
Cast caution to the wind, may fortune favour the foolish!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 21, 2012 04:26:15 AM Report
My foolish heart always leading...Another superb write from the master --



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 20, 2012 11:57:22 AM Report

'No [one] ever accused someone in love of being very smart...'  This is a brilliant line which really got me.  I think the whole poem is great.  Reminds me of a love-song; maybe from the 1930's or so...  the Golden Age, eh?  --Dave



Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 19, 2012 05:13:30 PM Report


Mmmmmmmm....seems like that woman still has her clutch on your heart....

 Some times you just have to take that leap of faith and hope its what you both want.... 

 JUst a very heart felt poem that reaches out so beautiful in poetic style...

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 19, 2012 02:06:47 PM Report
Um, wow Len, you sure as heck know how to throw an emotional punch!



Anna





 


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