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Author Name: Frees_deeas 2 Comments
Date Added: May 21, 2012 17:05:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
the day when solitude bacame my home
the day when solitude became my home
the mountains were the chasm
and I, was nothing but the echo
dearth and death
were soothing me in turns
a motherly sympathy
 
the day when solitude bacame my home
darkness was burning my eyes
the night had dreams no more
and loneliness was my bride 
the most faithful soulmate
every night she came to me
saying tommorrow she'll shine with sun
with me...
 
the day when solitude bacame my home
with my blood
I painted a calender on the wall
then days would be in me
clocks would tick in my heart
I am a thorn within
and its I ,who tears me
and its I ,who has me bleed
I sat on a chair in the porch
watching the sunset
and the pain itself
caressed my wounds
a motherly sympathy
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
the poem was written in Persian originally and I had to back translate it to English, so It may have some problems in edition and writing that I would be grateful if you let me know about them. thanks
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 21, 2012 06:00:17 PM Report
I love the flow of this piece, just the way it is. There is a depth of feeling that goes beyond the mere words on the page. This IS poetry!



Anna

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 21, 2012 05:30:33 PM Report


 Its well expressed... just like it is.... I have felt just like this....

 Where I live ... In the Big Bend Desert.... I live high on a mountain and watch sunrise and sunset.

.Its peaceful sooothing its a comfort to my weary heart.... After a long day at work..a shower ..

some cold wine and sit outside to relax and feel the coooooool breeze....

 Always ~ She Whispers





 


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