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Author Name: PremiumFirestoneFeinberg 6 Comments
Date Added: May 20, 2012 12:05:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THE BOY OF WORDS WHO NEVER HAD SPOKEN
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5/19/12


THE BOY OF WORDS WHO NEVER HAD SPOKEN


The boy of words who never had spoken
Stood at the edge of a universe hurt
And silently wept for dreams become cursed
And daydreams and rainbows all but broken.
Yes. Even these he had barely known — when
Each one collapsed and each one deserted
What had already been a damaged world —
Where it seemed most everyone was no one.

His tears turned to ice — and then to diamonds —
A miracle wrought — and value declared —
Despite the sad stillness of the moment...
For beauty is beauty — never undone —
Nor be so true wonder — the child of care —
These — and love too — eternally present.



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTaniya on May 23, 2012 10:09:03 AM Report
This amazed me and got me teary-eyed as well. The voice and the images your words invoke are in themselves so stunning and saddening. I would love to understand this poem more.
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on May 21, 2012 08:30:38 PM Report
One can regret having never spoken out on things that matter, but the "things" that truly matter will always matter so it is never too late to speak out.  Maybe the unspeaking boy has, or will, find his voice.  I like this poem .... think I'll send it to favorites
Nice, 

Gene 

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on May 21, 2012 08:30:37 PM Report
One can regret having never spoken out on things that matter, but the "things" that truly matter will always matter so it is never too late to speak out.  Maybe the unspeaking boy has, or will, find his voice.  I like this poem .... think I'll send it to favorites
Nice, 

Gene 

Comment By: PremiumAlistair Muir on May 21, 2012 02:50:57 AM Report
I think that this is just...David -- exquisite lyrical beauty -- a command of English and a wonderful flow and rhyme that is timeless - - which dances lyrically on the page -- sheer mastery --



Alistair

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 20, 2012 04:03:00 PM Report
I find it interesting that Len thinks Whitman while I thought Shel Silverstein. Whatever or whoever the inspiration it's wonderful!



Anna

Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on May 20, 2012 01:21:59 PM Report


Did you ever read Walt Whitman's Leaves of Grass? Something you wrote here, made me think of that work. Just curious if you did.Good job, dude.


 


Len





 


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