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Author Name: Frees_deeas 2 Comments
Date Added: May 23, 2012 03:05:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Darkness
I had black on for a life time
No one made a moment, touching my grief
except for the downpours of fall
Now let the leaves of an Oak tree
cover the nakedness of my gravestone
dont deprive me from its colors
cause I have long paid for my darkness
 
 
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Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on May 23, 2012 03:24:35 PM Report
You can sure pack a lot of feeling into seven lines Saeed! Well written my friend, as I am coming to expect.



Anna

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 23, 2012 12:11:33 PM Report


This  is just awesome so much in a short poem I feel the misery.... 

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