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Author Name: Freedazriz 1 Comments
Date Added: May 25, 2012 19:05:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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burned
have you ever loved somebody
that you just forget to breathe
time no longer holds no reason
thoughts arrive before you leave
your blind with both eyes open
as your brain forgets to sleep
you believe that you are coping
then realise your in too deep
the pain becomes a reminder
that your here and still alive
the feelings dealt that bind her
to a heart that cant survive
then panic starts to follow
when you see theres no way out
your strength to weak and hollow
confidence swamped with doubt
until your core is broken
as you have nothing else to give
every word already spoken
without reaction to forgive
have you ever loved somebody
when the love is not returned
time no longer has a reason
if your soul has just been burned
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Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 26, 2012 09:45:34 AM Report
Very expressive poem, Darren.  I always enjoy your writing.  --David




 


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