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Author Name: Premiumaliopterix 2 Comments
Date Added: May 26, 2012 05:05:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
One Of Your Smiles


One Of Your Smiles



Far away in the recess of my mind I hear your call –

Like a timid creature I have hidden away from you;

I am not strong now but weak – have no confidence at all –

My support has collapsed and there is no back-up in lieu;

I am so far withdrawn the way back seems so far away –

So far indeed I know not whether I can stay the course;

A small strand of light connects the dark to the break of day –

I grasp it and begin to pull but the life-line is coarse;

My hands begin to bleed and my resolve is now tested –

It is hard but your voice becomes clearer – becomes stronger;

I must do this for in my life my interest is vested –

To be so far away is wrong – I want this no longer;

I fixate on your voice and pull in those days and those miles –

I hasten to you and seek your laughter – one of your smiles...



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Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on May 26, 2012 08:01:27 AM Report


YEAH!! What he said!! Al, what's the deal? We need our Kingy!! lol. Hey square biz, dude, we need ya, if there's anything I can do or any of us, just ask....except for dough! lol. Seriously, we've got your back. Word....


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on May 26, 2012 07:47:45 AM Report
Well you might be depressed but you sure ain't lost your poetic touch.  God will help you out of this 'fox hole'.  We have missed you here; your presence is requested.  R.S.V.P.  Creative-Poems.  --David




 


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