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Author Name: FreeBRUCE MARTONE 3 Comments
Date Added: June 12, 2012 04:06:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Friendship Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
why

Did you say your prayers little darling
and do you think he heard you alright
where  he will bring you a better day
 and take away your saddness
 that kept you up tonight
 where you just couldn't say
 and I couldn't tell you
 every thing would be alright.
Now tomorrow has come
 and still there no smile on your face
 because all you do is paced
as I try to get you to leave your place
 showing you a good time
 but you say no you don't want to go
 and you won't say why you just say goodbye
leaving me confused on why
but still I go whispering goodbye

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on July 3, 2012 07:12:34 AM Report


Why and Goodbye make up a sad pair.


True to life poem written with  such care.

Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on June 12, 2012 09:03:59 AM Report
A sensitive and thoughtful poem.  I really like it.  --David
Comment By: FreeHOPE on June 12, 2012 06:06:19 AM Report
Bruce,
A sorrowful piece.  Often we cannot fix the problems in the soul of others we love.  Nicely written.

Love

Tina








 


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