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Author Name: Freeammar 2 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2012 14:06:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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I Gaze at the Mirror

I gaze at the mirror:

The features that I see

Are contrary to what

The mirror whispers to me.

 

I see a familiar form,

Abound with common traits –

Nothing striking or unique –

Unchanged as of late.

 

Yet the mirror whispers,

And acutely reflects,

That I must draw towards

What much I neglect:

 

That which lies within –

The ‘me’ that is inside –

The sentiments and thoughts

That within me reside,

 

And gazing at the mirror –

Staring at the outward me –

From such an obligation

I must strive to be free.



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Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on June 16, 2012 12:47:29 PM Report
It is always a reckoning when we truly see 'self' in the mirror - not just the self we desire to be.  At that point, our goals are set and we embark on the path to release - to freedom.  Your rhyme is even, tight and lilting.  I flew through the read easily and am enchanted with its message.  Thank you.  ~Pamela
Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on June 16, 2012 10:33:18 AM Report
I know you are telling the truth about how you feel when you look at yourself.  If only you could see yourself as I see you!  To me you are a perfect person.  You balance.  Accept no limits -- and you will go further and further and you will help many.  --David




 


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