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Author Name: Premiumaliopterix 2 Comments
Date Added: July 01, 2012 04:07:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Running


Running



Running – running down the black-top –

Barefoot – wearing a milk-white dress;

Hair – blonde – streaming behind – can't stop –

The sun beating down – her witness;

Tears stream from wide, staring blue eyes –

Her face is a mass of hurt – pain;

She has had enough of the lies –

Nothing had been real – all a strain;


Her arms pump – down the road she flies –

The tarmac hot and sticky burns;

Cacti line the way – verdant spies –

Will she find the peace that she yearns?

At last – exhausted – she slumps down –

Her tears staining her bridal gown.



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Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on July 2, 2012 10:50:33 AM Report
Masterpieces do come of misery; it is a paradox.  This is an example of excellence.  You will emerge.  Do not slip back.  Or you'll be beheaded by King Al and all his royal court!  -- Lord Chamberlain
Comment By: PremiumTomahawk on July 1, 2012 11:12:04 AM Report


Wow, this is intense! I can picture this beautiful young maiden, running hard toward what used to be and away from what is. It all fits, but it's symbolic, your run from what vexes you now, toward the happier times....with your loyal knights. We're here, Dave, Dirk, Henry, Kymberly and myself, among others. Let us fight with you, a tilt to end the tyranny of the evil usurper that tries but will certainly fail this day!! Our swords are at the ready, Kingy!!


 


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