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Author Name: Freeciteop 1 Comments
Date Added: July 03, 2012 04:07:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I gotta say goodbye
really colton

i gotta say goodbye, i did have a good night with you the other night, it was good and peaceful [♥] have a great life colton xoxo

every night the cuts get deeper and my mind grows weaker, as the colors to my heart, starts to fade to the shades of shallow grave, as this monster inside of me just paves the way, dragging the remains of my souls carcass, i cant hold to a glow that has already departed from this, just an empty shell, mentally i fell beneath the rocks that were suppose to be the bottom of my sorrows. its more then a problem, when blood hits the drain, but this pain will not wash away, thoughts of her get lost in a razor blade, my friends speak of better days but death shows me the outlet for when i 'm feeling helpless,so you can call it selfish, but i call it a way out because i cant change the hell i've caused, a plague of pain devoured the people i loved, so there pain is on my hands and my blood falls where i stand, i write my apologies in the blood before it stains the ground, so you can't save me now, i pay for my mistakes at the bottom of my grave.
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Comment By: FreeFrederick Kesner on January 11, 2013 07:16:08 AM Report
There are some very original lines in this poem. Riveting.






 


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