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Comment By: Sensual Sorceress on November 29, 2012 01:55:53 AM |
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I'll sing a few with ya, you betcha. This is lovely and so delicate.
Love always,
me
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Comment By: Sensual Sorceress on November 29, 2012 01:55:53 AM |
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I'll sing a few with ya, you betcha. This is lovely and so delicate.
Love always,
me
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Comment By: ken on October 9, 2012 09:19:35 PM |
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A plea for safe passage through the night.
I like the flow and cadence you have employed.
well done
ken
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Comment By: Henry M. on September 15, 2012 11:07:22 AM |
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Kym, this is an excellent take on the song, amazing rhyme and meter, bravo! Hugs, Henry
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Comment By: Merv on September 10, 2012 05:49:23 PM |
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What would life be without dreams. And you express those thoughts very nicely
Wonderfully written
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Comment By: Leonard Wilson on July 21, 2012 04:36:11 PM |
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It's going thriough my head now, Niece....LOve that song...Dream on, kid....len
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Comment By: Joe McNinney on July 9, 2012 04:41:48 PM |
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No, but I can spit out lines from Waynes World! LOL!
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Comment By: Dan J. Mazurek on July 9, 2012 12:26:34 PM |
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Your spinning wheel is threaded with a poetice weave.
I can see the lines coming right from your hand.
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Comment By: She Whispers on July 8, 2012 03:07:39 PM |
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Mmmmmmm ...you put a lot of thought to this lovely poem...
Dream weaver if only life could be so beautiful... Without dreams we are nothing....
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Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on July 8, 2012 09:33:40 AM |
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This is nothing less than an evening prayer -- a living and loving lullaby. Be proud of this song. It sings of your sweet self. --David
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Comment By: Harry William Harborne on July 8, 2012 07:14:22 AM |
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Beautiful and so well written, it slides off the tongue and was a pleasure to read. I hope you fulfill those dreams.
Bill Harborne.
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Comment By: Tomahawk on July 7, 2012 06:45:10 PM |
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Very ethereal and fleeting, a dream piece.
Len
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