Multiplied Mind by Shawn

		Author Name: BrokenBeast	4 Comments
		Date Added: July 07, 2012 19:07:06	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse

Category: Depression

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Multiplied Mind

One idea rolls upon itself,

Catches another,

Twists, Turns

Fleets and Floats

Drifts, meets more.

Morphs-bends-implodes.

Divides, replicates,

Like a blastocyst.

Then an embryo of thought.

Agitation occurs.

Soon interrupted.

Growth disturbed.

Electric impulses discharged.

Then galloping begins,

Flight ensues.

All processed thought dismembered.

Creation destroyed, never to come to fruition.

The Aftermath frantically searches for adherence.

Binds to cyclic tornadic patterns and grows.

And Grows. Snowballs.

It crushes the thinker beneath its frozen state.

Until inertia.

Author's Notes:

I have a problem with racing thoughts, wrote this after a bad day. Have no idea how to punctuate this though?

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Comments:

	Comment By: Tomahawk on August 18, 2012 10:53:04 AM	Report
	In physics, inertia is the tendency for an object at rest to stay at rest, or an object in motion to stay in motion, until acted upon by an outside force. In your case, your inertia, is the halting of your fleeting thoughts and racing mindstorm,through some other means than your cognitive processes. In other words, your reality kicks in and slows things down, so you may cope with your life. Just remember, Shawn, sometimes a little too much speed can slow you down. Good piece. Len Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Harry William Harborne on July 9, 2012 06:16:07 AM	Report
	I thought this was very genuine and you described it brilliantly, I have alway thought that when in doubt regarding punctuation that it is best to reduce it to a full stop at the end lol. Bill Harborne Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: John Armlovich on July 8, 2012 03:07:32 PM	Report
	Ah, my friend, I am glad to see that you have posted my favorite poem of the ones that I read at that place. Welcome to Creative-Poems. I hope you continue to post more poems on here. I would love to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing my friend, John Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on July 8, 2012 10:27:16 AM	Report
	Well it explains itself...Its fine like it is.... Welcome to our site!! Always ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment