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Author Name: FreeSnoopWoodstock 2 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2012 16:07:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Lonely Ocean


                                                        I look beyond

                                           It’s like the earth has an edge

                                                      Silky black water

                                                        A big fish tank

                                                      Ripples in pain

                                               Mist above this velvet

                                          Listen to hear its moaning

                                                Crying for its help

                                               Through the splashing

                                                    Doesn’t anyone notice?

                                                     The ocean has no company

                                                           Darkness has its deadly silence

                                                                Nothing makes a sound

                                                                  Grateful sound of wave

                                                                    When the fishes awake

                                                                     Until darkness falls again

                                                                                          Upon this lonely ocean

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on July 8, 2012 05:10:06 PM Report


Welcome to our Site!!

 Beautiful written.... You are very gifted!! I understand your vision of sounds....

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on July 8, 2012 04:41:18 PM Report
A truly visual piece. Well done, and welcome to C-P.



~KD~


 


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