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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 6 Comments
Date Added: October 18, 2003 06:10:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Vacancy
I've laid out all the framework
The plan is set in motion
This time I did my homework
I've saddled my emotion
Constructing my new kingdom
It's all been built to scale
Relying on my wisdom
To make sure I won't fail
The ground, it has been broken
The work, it has begun
My arms now spread wide open
Prepared to come undone
I'm looking now for tenants
Someone to live within
To finish every sentence
And fill these rooms again
So if you seek a safe place
To let your heart reside
I'm sure there is enough space
For you to come inside
So pack up all your things
And store them here with me
No matter what you bring
There is a vacancy
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Comments:
Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on October 20, 2003 06:32:05 AM Report
Jake, this is very well written.
Comment By: FreeCaryn on October 19, 2003 06:40:05 AM Report
I moving in, I need more than one room. :) Oh...and do you have a hot tub or a pool.
:)
Leave the light on for me!
~Caryn~
Great Job, Jake!
Comment By: FreeAlec Wilson on October 19, 2003 03:00:53 AM Report
very nice write. Good description.
Alec
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 18, 2003 09:09:00 PM Report
This reminded me of my poem 'My Vacant Heart'. I'm sure you have plenty of room in a heart the size of yours. Nice poem Jakester!

=))
Barbara
Comment By: FreeKay on October 18, 2003 07:49:10 AM Report
made my heart melt
Comment By: Premiumeditor_in_chief on October 18, 2003 06:47:53 AM Report
fantastic write jake! sounds like a bigger promotion than hbo in every room-




 


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