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Author Name: Freeblackberrypatch 1 Comments
Date Added: December 31, 2003 18:12:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Feelings Are So Hard To Share
Feelings are so hard to unfold
All I wanted was you to hold
Was this real and all to be
Both of us feeling so happy
 
Then I woke up all full of woe
Wondering now where should I go?
We only wonder if it's really fair
That no one else seems to care
 
With the two of us standing alone
Wondering if we'd ever be home
I heard my mother speak with that tone
See now, I told you not to roam
 
It was late when we came back
Being worried we'd get flack
We had walked to the shack
As we constantly watched our back
 
As we walked to the woods
She stopped and asked me if I could
I always knew that she would
Now I wonder if I should
 
Should I say it's okay
If only we were here to stay
I would say yes right away
For i'd really like to play!
 
As we began to hold hands
We started talking of our plans
I felt like kicking those cans
As I started drifting like the sands
 
As I looked into her eyes
I had to wonder is it wise?
All of a sudden to my surprise
She started to let out these horrid cries
 
She scared the hell out of me
All of a sudden I wanted to be free
But I stopped and thought some more
Is she hurt or is she sore?
 
And should I really close that door
For if I do she'll be no more
So I decided not to stray
I just wonder what she will say
 
Will this really end this way?
Or will this finally be our day!
Circumference is closing and this is true
Two ways of thinking is hard to do!
 
She yell-ed out, I really love you
Then I knew
Just what I was supposed to do.
I then decided to marry you! 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumGlata on January 31, 2005 10:15:19 AM Report
Feelings ARE hard to share....especially if the person has been hurt too often...
Great write, Patch :)
Hugs!
Glata




 


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