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Comment By: Helen on January 9, 2012 01:33:40 PM |
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A very unusual poem... and storms in Oklahoma, I take it, are usual... and in releality it's wiser to hide than stand there looking at the tornado?? :)
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Comment By: Moon Fairy on October 29, 2006 11:02:55 PM |
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Wow!! Great stuff here Keith! Belated congratulations on your blue ribbon award.
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Comment By: Cindy Bendel on March 27, 2006 01:10:17 PM |
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Incredible write. You are very creative and your talent does shine in this one. A well deserved award.
~Cindy
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Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on March 4, 2006 05:49:20 AM |
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I can see why a beautiful blue ribbon dons this piece Keith. It is amazing. I love the places your mind goes, wrapped up in natures call, with all its mighty power, and yet how tender passioned touches can be. Your metaphores are truly amazing. Your trademark I might think. :o) ~Pam
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Comment By: Gay Johnson on June 26, 2004 05:13:41 PM |
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I can't believe that I missed this one. AWESOME write. belated Congrats on the blue ribbon.
Gentle Dove
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Comment By: Richard Johnson on June 25, 2004 11:58:05 PM |
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Wow! Awesome and powerful write Keith.
Richard
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Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on June 8, 2004 06:16:37 PM |
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Keith- This is the stuff of great legendsm I really enjoyed the imagery and the storyline.
---Poetrydad---
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Comment By: T. Rukshan Perera on May 1, 2004 12:27:41 PM |
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The nice story kept me in my seat to the end, a good story. Nice.
~T.Perera~
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Comment By: joia on April 29, 2004 06:42:25 PM |
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And dust storms. They are awesome too, as was your poem. Congratulations. joia
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| Comment By: on April 28, 2004 10:19:01 PM |
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Outstanding...
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Comment By: Melissa on April 27, 2004 10:18:02 PM |
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Congratulations on the award, for this great write. ~Melissa
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Comment By: Leigh Star on April 27, 2004 04:54:49 PM |
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Keith:
awesome poem! I live in Ga and we don't get tornados down here that much (so far none lol) but we do get a lot of hurricanes :( lol
THis was fantastic! OOOOOHHHH!!! Congrats on the blue ribbon, so proud! This poem totally deserved it!
*leigh*
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Comment By: Starr on April 26, 2004 09:31:40 PM |
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Great write i lived in Tulsa for 22 yrs and then i moved to OKC where there are a lot more touchdowns. i think it's time to get out of oklahoma..lol
starr
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Comment By: She Whispers on April 26, 2004 08:47:42 PM |
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KEITH,
YOU OUT DID YOUR SELF ON THIS EXCELLENT WRITE >.
ITS A MASTERPIECE!*****
JUST BEAUTIFUL..ALWAYS INDIA-SHE
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Comment By: The Bag Lady on April 26, 2004 01:38:10 PM |
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Outstanding, Keith~! Such vivid insight to the plight~! I loved it, and am happy that you won the Blue Ribbon Award...Congratulations....
Margaret...the old bag lady
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Comment By: Lucinda on April 26, 2004 12:16:52 PM |
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This was a wonderful write, nice job!
Lucinda
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on April 26, 2004 03:10:32 AM |
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'You are truly the most beautiful flower in all the world and I have come to plant you in the pot of my heart', I love this Keith! This has a positive ending...with her not fearing the storm but willingly wanting to be taken away by it.
Congratulations Keith, this is wonderful, as always!
~Barbara~
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Comment By: nanette on April 25, 2004 10:29:28 PM |
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Keith,
Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Your write is a wonderful vision..
Thank you for sharing
~Nanette
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Comment By: Ann on April 25, 2004 12:52:05 PM |
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Great job. Can you just imagine it?!
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