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Author Name: Freetimespell 5 Comments
Date Added: May 05, 2004 10:05:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Trading Places.
Welcome to the hotel of dreams,
quite simply a place in between.
With pleasure you can open all doors,
and treasure the pleasures in store.

Sit back and relax in your chair,
drift off to places you dare.
That's right sit down, off you go,
everythings possible enjoy the show.

Oh dear what's bothering you so,
you're shaking from head to your toes.
Oh dear you're eyes see blood red,
I better change, the program your feed.

That's better, off we go,
sweet dreams that's the show.
You're flying above the clouds,
look out here comes the ground.

Oh dear what have you done,
you seemed to off shit on everyone,
whats that, if pigs could fly,
indeed such a vivid mind.

Well my friend it's time for me to go,
I hope you enjoyed your picture show.
Whats that, you want to come too,
I'm sorry but the devil invited you.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeT. Rukshan Perera on May 9, 2004 05:20:11 AM Report
Great bit of poetry.
~T.Perera~
Comment By: FreeJennifer on May 7, 2004 10:45:38 AM Report
this is cool... horror movies scare the s**t out of me!
But I like this very much!
Jen
Comment By: Freenanette on May 6, 2004 09:12:11 AM Report
T.S.
What a brilliant concept.. Take one last look as to why you are here.. Brilliant, simply brilliant..Thank you for sharing this inspirational look at reality.
Thank you
~Nanette
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 5, 2004 08:21:34 PM Report
I LOVE HORROR FILMS.. THIS IS EXCELLENT..FRIENDS SHE
Comment By: FreeChris B on May 5, 2004 10:30:10 AM Report
good stuff, when i read the title it reminded me of redesigning stuff...




 


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