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Author Name: Freeonelilartist 14 Comments
Date Added: May 15, 2004 08:05:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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End Of The World
End Of The World The sun arose in flaming red, And washed across the sky. I thought the world would surely end, If e're you said "goodbye". The birds are trilling, singing. The light spears through the trees. I'd oft' supposed my life would close, If you should ever leave. The mantle clock is ticking on. It chimes upon the hour. I'd thought that time would come to end, You held me in such power. My heart is beating in my breast. The pain I feel like fire. You said you'd love me 'til I died. Oh! You were such a liar! The traffic passes on the street. I hear the radio. I'd thought the world would surely end, My God! It is not so!
Author's Notes:
Last Monday, May 3, 2004, I came in from teaching school all day to find my husband lying in the floor dead of a heart attack. I am amazed every day that our world is the only one that has shattered. Everything else is business as usual. God, how I miss my Jim!
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Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on October 24, 2004 03:07:00 PM Report
A beautiful, moving piece. I can't imagine the pain you must have felt. You have done him proud with this one. It is going in my favorites. Well deserved ribbon.
Mary
Comment By: Freeclaire fernandez on May 22, 2004 04:09:11 AM Report
im so sorry for your loss, and i feel for you dear jessica. i can just imagine what you are going thru and it breaks my heart already! this poem is so sad, yet so loving. congratulations on the award. may God comfort you in your loss.

---
claire
Comment By: FreeMelissa on May 20, 2004 09:39:23 PM Report
Jessica~
How sad. I am truly sorry for your loss. I can't imagine the pain you are still feeling, but I am very grateful you decided to share this wonderful work of art with all of us. Congrats on the award. And again, I am truly sorry for your loss and truly hope somehow, some way you can find happiness again. Take care.
~Melissa
Comment By: FreeNancy B Scott on May 19, 2004 04:30:07 AM Report
I am so very, very sorry for your loss. I too lost my mom on Mother's Day, May 9. I truly sympathize with you, may God Bless you and give you strength. Nan
Comment By: FreeMegan Catherine on May 18, 2004 07:23:29 PM Report
Jessica,
Surely, he loves you still. This is a beautifully written piece, and it made me cry. I am so sorry for your loss.
Meg
Comment By: FreeBlack RosedPanther on May 18, 2004 03:41:27 PM Report
im so sorrry about your husband, it is really sadthat it happened.....wonderful write..... you deserved this blue ribbon.
blessed be, Dana
Comment By: FreeCindy R on May 17, 2004 09:42:46 PM Report
Psalms 34:18
Jehovah is near to those that are broken at
heart; And those who are crushed in spirit
he saves.
Jessica,
I'm so sorry to hear of your loss. I pray these few words of spirit will touch your heart. Cindy
Comment By: Freejoia on May 17, 2004 06:56:29 PM Report
Jessica, I am so sorry. joia
Comment By: PremiumThe Bag Lady on May 17, 2004 05:28:03 PM Report
Dear, dear Jessica~~
Your post has broken my heart~ I am so terribly sorry for your pain, and I send a Million Rainbows to light your way~! This tribute is so very tearful, but written with a glowing pen in LOVE.....Thank you for posting it, and know that I care.....
Margaret...the Bag Lady
Comment By: PremiumAnn on May 16, 2004 11:37:53 PM Report
This is a tragic and heartfelt tribute to a person you deeply cared for. Beautiful write.
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on May 16, 2004 11:12:56 PM Report
My thoughts and prayers are with you. You have made a wonderful write out of your tragic situation..
Gay
Comment By: FreeReBeL CuTiE on May 16, 2004 10:54:43 PM Report
Jessica~
I am sooooo sorry to hear of this~
You have wrote such a beautiful write about it and the ribbon fits it well ;)

Hope time will ease the pain~
~KELLY~ a.k.a ReBeL CuTiE
Comment By: Freeerma todd on May 15, 2004 07:28:55 PM Report
God bless you sis I know what you mean business as usual. I've missed you so much....E
Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on May 15, 2004 08:26:31 AM Report
Jessica, my friend. Such a heart-felt write. My prayers are with you and for your lovely Jim now in Heaven.

Lady Dragonwyck




 


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