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Author Name: FreeLadyLuna 3 Comments
Date Added: May 18, 2004 00:05:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mr. Perfect
i always said i wouldn't change my life for anyone so why did you have to come into my life now everything i said i wasn't going to do is all i want to do i don't think this is mere infatuation which is what people seem to think i think i may have actually fallen for you in every single way when i originally made my list of qualities for my Mr. Perfect i didn't even know you or know that you existed i found it yesterday, that list and as i looked at it i saw... everything i wanted in Mr Perfect I have in you now if only i could tell you this without putting my heart on the line i don't know if i could deal with it another heartbreak severe everyone keeps saying that you love me and you'd end up following me i don't need to hear this from them i need to hear it from you i know this isn't mere infatuation i know this is love but what can i say to make myself take that giant leap of faith maybe when i see you and feel you maybe then i can tell you all i can tell right now is that you are too good to be true and that i really do love you and that right now i don't know what i'd do without you.
Author's Notes:
Ummm.. yeah Sissy is really my best friend... and yeah... that's that... it may not make sense but currently nothing is making sense in my head so i'm sorry about that *~CrystalClrBlood~*
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrea D. Carlon on June 26, 2004 04:00:38 AM Report
I enjoyed reading this poem. It's beautifully written. I loved how it flowed as I read it. It's something that I can relate to. Wonderful job. I applaud you. :-)

-Andrea-
aka Andy
Comment By: FreeRob Sparks on June 6, 2004 01:34:47 AM Report
I enjoyed this write very much. Take a step for heartbreak makes us stronger. We can only learn from mistakes and never know if it is until after the fact. You Rock!
rOb
Comment By: FreeTony Nguyen on May 30, 2004 11:06:03 PM Report
Dont get urself 2 worked up wit thingz like dis,luv's 2 complicated 2 undastand,jus go wit da flow.Nice work babe.




 


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