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Comment By:  Pascale on July 21, 2004 03:44:22 PM |
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Very beautiful poem. "but I carry on
wanting
hoping
wishing
because I
love
you"
This part is so touching
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| Comment By: melanie del valle on June 7, 2004 03:30:39 AM |
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sad but very passionate : sort of a high emotional pitch that shows the importance of the love itself in contrast to the pain... very cool! love it...
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| Comment By: Mike on June 2, 2004 07:27:59 PM |
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this is an amazing...poem...wow....very moving, no words to describe it...this really relates to me on so many levels....gah...amazing poem
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on June 1, 2004 04:29:35 AM |
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An open wound of a write,Jasmine.Powerful stuff!.You describe a hopeless situation.Emotional addiction,disguised as love.There's a lot of that going around.....len
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| Comment By: T. G. T on May 28, 2004 06:29:23 AM |
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Very powerful expressions that appeal to my emotional depths...
T.Tsiamis
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| Comment By: wislar on May 27, 2004 11:13:30 PM |
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This is a very emotional write Jasmine, so painful in its message. Love lost at times can be so unbearable we might try anything not to feel that hurt. Good write my friend.
wislar
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| Comment By: Jenn on May 27, 2004 03:21:23 AM |
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I really liked this poem. I like how you structured it. It gives off a lot of emotion and feeling without using long sentences or fancy words. Great poem :)
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| Comment By: Gay Johnson on May 27, 2004 02:53:16 AM |
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Jasmine, this spoke to my heart. so sad...
Gay
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| Comment By: nanette on May 26, 2004 08:18:04 PM |
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Jasmine,
What a powerful write..Brilliant display of confusion... Sometimes it is so hard when we want to give and seems at that particular time we can not.. Bravo
Thank you for sharing this write..
~Nanette
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Comment By:  Keith Overstreet on May 26, 2004 07:44:31 PM |
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So sad, Jasmine! Somehow we make it through the unbearable loss. And I know how hard it is when you love someone and they don't love you. Wonderful write of expression, Jasmine.
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| Comment By: William on May 25, 2004 09:49:09 AM |
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Veeeeery good, I am having the same feelings as we speak in a relationship. How can you give everything when he/she wants nothing from you but to be a friend and call when she needs me? Don't have the answer but very beautiful.
Bil
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| Comment By: Corina on May 25, 2004 08:41:58 AM |
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Hmm....very beautiful in its sadness...and full of honesty and generousity.
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