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Author Name: FreeLunarticFloydian 2 Comments
Date Added: June 13, 2004 02:06:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fluffy Clouds
Drifting between metaphors, I see everyone as a cloud. And in every cloud I see float by, a silver lining reflects the edge. Pulsating auras showing true colors; their minds are an open book. Some are in languages never seen, others are an easy read. Everyone existing existentially all around me, all similes of clouds, and happy. Humankind can be just that, if you're lucky enough to see past the brick. So many emotions, intertwined like vines, wrapping around our hearts. The emotions reflect all the buzzing lights like mirrors connected to truth. My empathic desires allow me to hear the rhytmic beats that communicate all around us. Once deciphered, I can view them properly and tap into their feelings. It is something next to ourter space, where gravity lets up to let you drift out, further and further from obscurity. Oh! So many wonderful lights dance around this place! They go over me like a mist; entrancing every nerve those beads of love touch. This glee-laden space, so full of so much! I float here because I choose to, and watching the others float, well, that is a never-ending task, but one I gladly endure.
Author's Notes:
Just a big chunk o'writing about a different way of viewing people walking around outside.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeEagle Eye on July 25, 2004 07:08:06 AM Report
I can imagen you writing a great sci fi story one day...perhaps even a movie script? keep up the vision!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 13, 2004 02:58:03 AM Report
You have an open mind, full of wonderful expression...just waiting to be released.

This is packed with good stuff, well done! =))

~Barbara~




 


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