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Author Name: FreeAnima Boko 2 Comments
Date Added: July 20, 2004 10:07:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your stupid cigarettes
Is it you or is it me? I don’t understand what I see. Here I am Flirty eyes and smile. Looking at you, so very beautiful, with those eyes and hair God if I could just have a moment. Just to say. I’m jealous of your cigarette. Ha, you didn’t see that one coming. When they are not there, you crave them When they are there, you have only them. They get your full attention. They get to caress you lips in a way I never could. As you leisurely pull one out, place it between lips. The look on your face is exquisite You roll them with such grace and care And your tongue peaks out, Ever so suggestively And it glides… I want to throw the thing away, replace it with myself. Your so close to me now… but I must look and not touch, feeling like a deprived child or spoiled brat. And the smoke dances above your head. A deep breath, then a sigh. A complete content smile. As the nicotine washes over you. It shows how much you love, need and want. Your cigarettes. So I’m jealous of you cigarettes, because you want need and love them. More than you could ever want, need and more importantly, love me
Author's Notes:
The line 'Jealous of your cigarette' is taken from the same entitled song by Workman Hawksley. I just like the concept...and it is very close to home at the moment.. Hope you enjoy..Its not my best work but I like it because I can relate to it Becky x
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Comment By: FreeSandy on March 9, 2006 06:05:29 PM Report
I know how you feel! And this is a wonerful analogy!! Great writing~Keep it up!!! ~Sandy~
Comment By: FreeMeladori Magpie on January 22, 2005 04:09:02 PM Report
Cigarettes are gross.




 


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